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Re: Your Dreams Kept me Awake
KatTrain, I'll be honest, dreams and moonlight - I've seen it all before, so the images here do not entice me as much as it would have. That being said, ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Listen carefully.
Jas, I've lived in NY for 8 years, so how can I not love this? I was just commenting on how your style is very detail-oriented. I'm so pleased with ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: The Space Between Infinity- 3
Jas, It's been a while, but I was able to dive right into this and feel right at home which is a great feeling. I'm going to apologize beforehand, it ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Audy's Star Fund! - Donate your Poetry
Done! ^-^
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Amber Lady
Lavvie, There's some very beautiful descriptions here, but that seems to be all that this poem becomes - a bunch of prosy descriptions to describe the personality of this woman. ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Buying Time
Ancient, Hehe, I rather enjoyed this, quite an entertaining read. When I got to the part where she turns to a wolf my eyes were literally bugging out like this: ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Turning into Infinity
Ancient, What is it? To me it sounded like a poem/prose poem. So "other poetry" ? Lol, is someone a poet, who doesn't know it? Anyway. Honestly, while I like ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: We're going numb
Demoness, I love this poem and I have a challenge for you: rewrite without the rhyme. The sentiment and contents in this is absolutely lovely, but the rhymes aren't anything ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: The Black and White Dancer
Inkwell, I wish I can write poems like you. Your style pulls everything together. If you don't mind, I want to go through this stanza by stanza. I thought overall, ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: silver
Belarusbirdy, I also love the images in this. I'm not too crazy about the line breaks, but I agree that once it gets to the end it becomes more effective ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Procrastination, Old Friend of Mine.
GeeLyria, I like how you have a conversation with your procrastination, that's a nice concept - however the meter/rhythm here is lacking. I just can't seem to be able to ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Bulwark Maintenance
Kyllorac, So here's what I have: upon first reading, I got the sense this was about maintaining a relationship. I rather like the metaphor. My mind automatically goes: okay, ships ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: The YWS 2011 Yearbook
I'll reserve this spot for now. There sure are a lot of you to write about...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Christmas Avatar Shop
74583c.jpg Good luck, Lumi!
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: It's the Most Wonderful Time of the Year! (again)
I might've swallowed it though.
Dec 1, 2011