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Audy

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: 1983

    Michaeld, You've gotten some great reviews already, I agree with a lot of what they say. ^-^ I'll try not to repeat anything. To start with, I do sense the ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Heat-Smothered

    Kafka, I only managed to read SmylinG's review afterward, so there might be a few things I repeated. Ah well. Morning driving on a sun-stung Mexican highway, concrete wisps around ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Confession

    Shinda, I like the concept for this poem and I like how there's a powerful voice behind the words. It really gives off this sense of determined conviction which is ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Whoredom

    Flowerchild, Oh, ugh, ehrm. I thought I was morbidly graphic, but these images are pretty up there ^_^ I found myself saying: FINALLY someone who can use imagery effectively

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Archive Re: The YWS Christmas Story

    Somewhere in the deep recesses of YWS, Audy sat peeling a lemon. It was going to be a very happy Christmas indeed. She laughed maniacally, rubbing her hands together in ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Kissing Alfredo

    Nothing special. I wanted to abandon my novel and play with these two nondescript characters. Might be using them for a much longer work? Hope you enjoy! The New Years ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Sunflower Light

    Creativityrules, I like the concept and some of the images, and I can certainly appreciate the emotions behind it, but I agree with Pengu up there. I certainly got the ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: You Are Like A Riddle to Me

    Jessa, I kind of like this, in the sense that I can really get and understand the emotions, there's definitely a connection with the reader here. I also like a ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Colder Calypso

    Pyro, I appreciate the voice in this, and the raw energy and such. The title is what intrigued me really, because I love me some Myth references, though I would've ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Go to Hell (Part 1 of 2)

    Mikepyro, You have such a particular style in all of your pieces. It just sounds so natural, almost like a particular flavor. It makes me really enjoy reading your pieces, ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Possibly Falling Into Love or Not, Maybe

    Spinelli, I must say I really love the title and the voice of this poem, I like how it sounds modest and indecisive. It's really refreshing, because the voice itself ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: 'Tis the Season to be Writin'!

    Great idea Mikko! If you like dark winter themes , this will be my placeholder until I actually write something Holiday-inspired.

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: for you

    Dreamwalker, I'm always excited when I come across one of your poems. Actually, I wish I can write poetry like you. You have a knack for narrowing into those key, ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Snow.

    Mikko, There's no shortage of reviews here, but I just had to comment xD Weather inspires everyone in so many different ways, so I love reading about such things. Without ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Wonders of Life

    Shiney, I'm glad I found this poem. It was a joy to read through, and honestly, quite refreshing to read about a positive outlook. ^-^ The lyrical quality of this ...

    Dec 5, 2011


The only person I know for certain I am better than is the person I used to be.
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