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Audy

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: 1983

    Michaeld, You've gotten some great reviews already, I agree with a lot of what they say. ^-^ I'll try not to repeat anything. To start with, I do sense the ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Heat-Smothered

    Kafka, I only managed to read SmylinG's review afterward, so there might be a few things I repeated. Ah well. Morning driving on a sun-stung Mexican highway, concrete wisps around ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Confession

    Shinda, I like the concept for this poem and I like how there's a powerful voice behind the words. It really gives off this sense of determined conviction which is ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Whoredom

    Flowerchild, Oh, ugh, ehrm. I thought I was morbidly graphic, but these images are pretty up there ^_^ I found myself saying: FINALLY someone who can use imagery effectively

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Archive Re: The YWS Christmas Story

    Somewhere in the deep recesses of YWS, Audy sat peeling a lemon. It was going to be a very happy Christmas indeed. She laughed maniacally, rubbing her hands together in ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Kissing Alfredo

    Nothing special. I wanted to abandon my novel and play with these two nondescript characters. Might be using them for a much longer work? Hope you enjoy! The New Years ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Sunflower Light

    Creativityrules, I like the concept and some of the images, and I can certainly appreciate the emotions behind it, but I agree with Pengu up there. I certainly got the ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: You Are Like A Riddle to Me

    Jessa, I kind of like this, in the sense that I can really get and understand the emotions, there's definitely a connection with the reader here. I also like a ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Colder Calypso

    Pyro, I appreciate the voice in this, and the raw energy and such. The title is what intrigued me really, because I love me some Myth references, though I would've ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Go to Hell (Part 1 of 2)

    Mikepyro, You have such a particular style in all of your pieces. It just sounds so natural, almost like a particular flavor. It makes me really enjoy reading your pieces, ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Possibly Falling Into Love or Not, Maybe

    Spinelli, I must say I really love the title and the voice of this poem, I like how it sounds modest and indecisive. It's really refreshing, because the voice itself ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: 'Tis the Season to be Writin'!

    Great idea Mikko! If you like dark winter themes , this will be my placeholder until I actually write something Holiday-inspired.

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: for you

    Dreamwalker, I'm always excited when I come across one of your poems. Actually, I wish I can write poetry like you. You have a knack for narrowing into those key, ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Snow.

    Mikko, There's no shortage of reviews here, but I just had to comment xD Weather inspires everyone in so many different ways, so I love reading about such things. Without ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Wonders of Life

    Shiney, I'm glad I found this poem. It was a joy to read through, and honestly, quite refreshing to read about a positive outlook. ^-^ The lyrical quality of this ...

    Dec 5, 2011


By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food until you return to the ground, since from it you were taken; for dust you are and to dust you will return.
— Genesis 3:19