Audy

Argghg. Someone already beat me with Schindler's List... Requiem for a Dream is BEYOND sad - it is the most depressing piece of work I have ever experienced. Ditto on ...

If only I was a friend on this site and not dedicated to actually writing! :smt003 Pfftt. I don't think you have anything to worry about :P You may nominate ...

Here's three more for fun.

Persy, That feeling when you know you have a good novel in your hands, and you sit back and read and enjoy, feet propped up on the coffee table? That ...

wewinwelose, I have some simple questions, but they only apply if you are planning to further improve this piece. What is poetry to you? And what is your intent with ...

Emmzziee, To go along with what ghostie mentioned, yes the rhythm and flow of the poem is off, mostly the issue here has to do with punctuation errors. Forget this ...

Great idea, Rosey! ^_^ I've got us two for the moment. I'll be back for more tonight. (would've been 5 but I get my timezones all wrong X_x) viewtopic.php?f=8&t=91735

Anna, I love your concepts and ideas. The rhyming was nice to hear, there were a few places that it seemed somewhat forced ^_^; also be sure to keep a ...

Samii, I like the poem and I like the intentions, there is definitely a lyrical quality to this, love the shedding velvet line. I do like the images here, the ...

Michaeld, Err. This is a most difficult review for me. I'm all for defying conventions in genre, yet my honest opinion tells me this certainly read more like prose. I ...

Horizon, I'm proud to say that your experiment is a success. In the sense that this is indeed a pretty good poem (I liked it, anyway), and it does indeed ...

Hamingway, You know, I like this as a starting point. Like a springboard. Now you just have to make us care. What I'm getting at the moment is the speaker's ...

Hello Amberla, I actually quite like the poem. The message was real clear and I liked the direction it went :) I thought it was cute there in the beginning, ...

I'll help as best I can ^_^;

Excellent. ^_^ I was wondering about that. It sure is nice to have the lounge and everything on the front page, it'll be much easier to keep track of this ...