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Cillian Tooley | Hogwarts Express Something sped along the train's narrow corridor, weaving between the legs of several students. Somehow, it managed to catch a few chatty first years off ...

So I've got my character profile done last minute. If anyone wants to go down the agonizing path of becoming Cil's fellow Slytherin friend - let me know. We can ...

Name: Cillian (pronounced Killian- it's Irish) Tooley Gender: Male School Year: Fourth House: Slytherin Blood Status: Pure blood Wand Description: The wand is made of sweetgum and has a core ...

Shall I be your first? :)

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Ladyinpurple597, Aw, bittersweet. What can I say, I liked it! :) Overall, I felt the meter and rhythm was well done, it certainly flowed nicely and I like how the ...

Nice to meet you Zlywilk. This is long and a disheartening piece, so I'll return the favor if there's anything you yourself want reviewed. Thanks :)

I dug this board up specifically my friend. whenever you feel like having a go :)

Rated for content and language. Please, do survey this plantation of scrapers, and irrigated subway streams the congested flow of polluted blood. These black bags billowing through, like half-imagined

A thousand clocks cluttered on wall-space like the trillion stars splattered in real space. Such a man exists.

Persy, Oh, that poor narrator. So me likes: the setting, the images+descriptions. My favorite part: and he parts muscle from heart and says “You have eaten so much guilt; it ...

Karzin, Oooh, this is interesting. I like this: the sigh of scrunched eyelids I like how the line ties in with the title, while simultaneously making me squirm. I like ...

Speakerskat, I like the thought process behind this piece, I can quite vividly see your ideas and you state them quite clearly. But that's what this becomes - stated ideas. ...

Tgirly, I have to say that I love this poem - not so much the title. I do like the sentiments expressed here though, I like how you incorporated some ...

Spark, I actually remember reading the snippet for this when we were doing workshop ;) So I feel priveleged to see the next development. I understand that this a draft, ...