AudreyAlice

Okay. So I have this personal narrative posted in Non-Fiction. I know you said that you don't review non-fiction, but I thought I would ask anyway. I have seen some ...

Hey! So I am Audrey, and seeing as you have no reviews, I thought I might give you my input. So lets get to it. The Good I think you ...

First, I would like to thank-you for the review you gave my piece, so I thought I might return the favor. :D So without further ado... The Good, The Great, ...

I know the feeling, I have lost quite a few good peices that way. It really really stinks! My suggestion is to always work in Word. Normally, they have built ...

So, lets try this again shall we... Well, first off I really really liked this piece. It sincerely refreshing to read something new and different! Your detail is amazing...part of ...

Okay, so I wrote a really careful review for this piece, but it was accidently deleted, it took me like an hour. :? I will try and type it up ...

I would love a review! I have only got one so far, and it wasn't very long. Just letting you know...I really love nits-picks! Here is the link: Also, when ...

This is an assignment I had to do for my composition class. It had to be a personal narrative, this is what I came up with. Any and all reviews ...

Hey! :D I am Audrey, and I thought I might review your piece. I'll just highlight some of the big things I noticed. Grammar While there was a few other ...

I really liked the poem is was really whimsical, and made me smile, which is always good. :D I especially enjoyed these lines because I could immediately picture it in ...

I think this is a great beginning to a story. I have a few comments. First, I found the prologue to be a bit jolting, and slightly cliche. Like was ...

Well, I guess this is as good a place to start as any. My name is Audrey. I live in the US, and currently am in the 12th grade. I ...