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Re: Underhome
Hey! Thought I would review this today. So, since this piece is so short, I can't really give much of a review. From what I gather this is an excerpt ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Running From Myself
Hello! I must say, I really liked your first few paragraphs, very well written. I understood the panic, the regret, the listlessness. I found it to be a very compelling ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Alice's World
Hey! Thought I would review your piece today. I liked your intro, though it was a bit heavy on the description, I think it was a good way for us ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: All Hallows Eve
Hello, So this is super creepy, so naturally, I love it. :D Super appropriate for Halloween. I'm not sure how much you actually want to edit this, but I'll give ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Signals - The Prologue
Hello! I thought I would review your piece today. I have one large suggestion for you, which if you take it means revamping this whole prologue, but I really think ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: The Littlest Moments that Make the BIGGEST Memories
Hello! I read your piece, and have a few comments, so let's get to them! First, I love that you started with the Frost quote. Starting each chapter with a ...
Oct 31, 2010