Aubrey7

Thanks, for the suggestions!

Thank you! That means more to me than you'll ever know!

Oh, this didn't exaclty happen to me, this is based of of things that have happened to me, like, I've lost frined over stupid reasons and later figured out how ...

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Alright, I get it, but I have some advice for you, when criticizing other people's work, be at least a LITTLE NICER about it, okay? Cool

Sure thing!

i am ‘uncool’ This should be-I'm a 'dork' not I'm 'uncool' it make the poem flow more BTW I call you a friend clash with theirs inexplicably change theirs to ...

I wrote no connection because she was my mother figure when my mom and I weren't on good terms. Thanks for all of your help!

I know I'll get more criticisms, but I'd rather not have you be one of those people!

Sorry for freaking out, but I get shoved around a lot and sorta just spazzed out, I know, I know childish, I just sorta spazzed.

Well a lot of fights happen over misunderstandings, I know this from experience, I was making this story based off of things that have happened to me, so the misunderstanding ...

Oh, well I'm 13 and I call my mom "mommy" sometimes, my mommy loves when I call her that!

Thank you BlueAfrica! I truly think romance doesn't need as big of a spotlight as it has! I think friendship is WAY more important, and more interesting, too!

Sure thing, I'll do my best to fix those grammar mistakes too!

Thanks for the recommendation, I think I will expand it! I might even make a book from it! If you don't mind, I would love for you to be my ...