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Aubrey7

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Wilting Rose

    This is soooooo sad, but so true to many of us! You should add a hint of what happened to make her slowly fade away. You should also add her ...

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Memories of My Best Friend

    You should change it to clouds-like cotton, instead of, cotton-like clouds. Also, you should explain in your poem what happened between you and your best friend. I thought this was ...

    Apr 25, 2017


Daddy Long Legs are more closely related to crabs than spiders and somehow the idea of crablike creatures with spider legs that have escaped the entrappings of the primordial sea and now crawl over land and can walk up and down walls and ceilings creeps me more than I can adequately describe.
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