Aubree

This is a realllly good story. Keep writing.

Okay. This is really bugging me. In the last four or so chapters, you say something like 'she had a mild concussion, broke a rib, bla bla bla.' That is ...

You should have made her into a vamp. Woulda been cool.

Gr8 job COntinue. Please. (I chat speak all the time)

I thought I mentioned there were a few others....Guess not. Well. I'll change it a bit. But you liked it? Should I continue?

Sorry. Pressed the wrong button. But as I was saying, I didn't even know what 'it' was. Change it to, Where should we eat today, or where we gonna chow, ...