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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: A scene from my story

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    Mar 3, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Swimming Against the Kolyma River

    With everyone commenting on the beauty of your opening paragraph (with which I agree), I just wanted to clarify by "passive voice" I mean the grammatical use of "is", "were", ...

    Mar 2, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Beware Doll, You're Bound to Fall

    Wow, solid observations, thank you so much for reviewing it! Haha, yeah Adele is freaky. I can't really explain much more though, it's too complicated, but you'll probably understand a ...

    Feb 27, 2010


Find wonder in the everyday, find everyday language to articulate it.
— Maurice Manning