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Re: Slice p1
Hello! I'm Flash, and I'm going to review! The Good: Grammar wise, I don't see anything wrong. Good job on that! The details are phenomenal. It has vivid language and ...
Oct 25, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
I think this is interesting! I'm usually not one for SciFi, but this story is nice. I didn't see any grammar mistakes at all, so that's wonderful! The action is ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: The Rogue Ch.1
Hello! Overall, the story is really interesting! I've never seen a horse riding shape shifter. XD However, there were some grammar mistakes. "It's" is a contraction of "it is." The ...
Oct 11, 2014 -
Re: .
Hello! I really like the concept of this story! (Not just because I love wolves and circuses, either.) In circuses there are always lion/tiger tamers, never wolf ones. As far ...
Oct 9, 2014