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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Syall

    I like thus far, but it seems almost too wordy. Try using less adjectives, or spreading them out more, to make the sentences less heavy. That seems to fix itself ...

    Feb 9, 2005


These were autumn mornings, the time of year when kings of old went forth to conquest; and I, never stirring from my little corner in Calcutta, would let my mind wander over the whole world.
— Rabindranath Tagore, The Cabuliwallah