AstridBartleby

Thanks for the help. That's too bad that I can't. Ah well. It can't stop me. Thanks again.

Is there a way to delete my account? Not in love with this site at all.

It's really short because for the contest I was entering it in, I had a 500 word limit. Thank you very much for the review!

Hello! I'd love it if you could review my short story. Thanks so much! "Astrid"

If you have time, I'd love a little critique on this. Thanks so much! :)

It was freezing cold. Snow piled high. Night approached. My twelve-year-old self stood outside the school with the other choristers, gripping noisemakers and lanterns. Parents, teachers and others joi

Great to have you here! If you're willing to put in effort at the beginning to get your name out there, YWS is a great place to have people look ...

Welcome! One thing I must say is that if you want to get reviews, you have to give lots without expecting a lot in return. As a fairly new member ...

This is really quite fantastic. The light-hearted tone was an odd choice-- or so I thought at first. After reading it through a few times, I realized that the tone ...

A dream?

Well said, sir. And I completely agree. I signed up, thinking this would be a great opportunity to improve as a writer. However, I find myself logging on rather infrequently ...

This is great on a number of levels! I love how the full details aren't revealed until the end. It keeps up the suspense. I also like how we don't ...

Yeppers. I just posted two other JCP stories tonight. Hope you check them out! Thanks for the comment!

There he stood in all his late-teen awkwardness. Sporting skinny jeans, a t-shirt featuring some obscure vintage band, glasses reminiscent of Buddy Holly and a beanie, despite the spring heat, ...

I was fourteen when I became Jamie Coleman Philips. I was born Philip Jamivic, son of Jelena and Alexei Jamivic, Serbian immigrants who moved to Hamilton during the early 1990’s. ...