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Re: She came to me from the Ocean
Hey Casanova, Ashnirai here for a quick review. First of all, I just want to say that I love the simple beauty of the poem. It's not grand, nor majestic ...
Feb 12, 2017 -
Re: Intro for my piece titled Kalopsia
Hey there, Ashnirai here for a quick review. First of all, I want to say that I really like your the detail of your descriptions. I mean: dimly lit by ...
Feb 11, 2017 -
Re: Matt Daniels and the Sword of Diamonds - Book 1 of the Matt Daniels series : Chapter 1
Hey there, Ashnirai here for a quick review. Just a quick heads up, you've accidentally posted the chapter twice. It's pretty easy to fix though, I'm assuming you know how ...
Feb 11, 2017 -
Re: Locksmith Chapter 1 Part 2/2
Hey Atsmai, I'm here for Review Day ^^. To start off, I want to say that you have an interesting plot and I can't wait to hear more. You have ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Terminate - 1
Hey Noelle ^^ I hope Nano isn't giving you too much trouble. This is my first review, so please excuse me for rambling and/or being too pedantic. Anyway, onwards to ...
Jul 16, 2015