Ashlee

"Gramps says, 'One: are you German?' Prisoner can't do much but say yes. 'Two,' Gramps continues, and the prisoner sighs in relief, 'if I gave you this gun, would you ...

~ Hello everyone, I'm writing a new story, and I would greatly appreciate it if you give me your honest opinion of it. Thanks! :D ~ 1 The sky rumbled ...

I like this a lot but I don't really know whats going on... Is he in an insane-asylum? I hope you write more so I can figure this out... It's ...

I like this but I don't really know what's going on... Is he in an insane asylum? I'm confused but I hope you write more so I can figure this ...

This story is so sweet it made me cry. You know how to make the reader feel . I understood what Mary was going through, because I have just had ...

Like I said before, you are a very good writer. I like the female character. Is she a dream catcher, too? Anyways, I was walking down a street in a ...

That is so sweet! It's absolutely beautiful. I'm actually crying. If love really can last a lifetime then that is truly amazing. You are a vary good writer. You make ...

Wow. This is a very good prologue. It builds up the suspense with a little information then, BAM! It leaves you hanging. I think you have a pretty good grasp ...

~Hello everyone. thanks for the comments on chapter one. Please anyone reading this feel free to help it would be GREATLY appreciated. :o ~ 2 I sighed deeply and sat ...

You are an amazing writer! This story is fantastic. It is laced with emotions and feelings. I like how you give the readers background on the main character, it gives ...

I like this poem a lot , because just about everyone can relate to music. I’m wedged between strangers and an equally indifferent bar; Moving, seeing, breathing are each impossible. ...

=hi! I hope someone actually reads this. I have just started a new story and i don't really know what to think of it. Please, if you post a comment ...