Ashlee

Awww, this made me sad, particularly because I can relate to this poem. You really have a way of making people feel . I want to cry now, this was ...

Wow. I really liked this alot (that may make me sound weird, but I guess I am). You are an excellent writer, and even though this is unrelated to your ...

Well, not much to say about this one.. Tears stain my face Blood stains my arms I don't even know who it is that stands in the mirror anymore It ...

I liked it!! ~Your bestie, Ashlee!~

Where it says, "All my friend love looking at them" it should say friends. I like having the candy. I always have a lot by the time I am all ...

Wow. I really liked this a lot. It makes me feel a bit nostalgic. When you mentioned the pictures, for some reason it made me think of time passing by. ...

5 The hot water sloshed into the tub as I waited, impatiently for the porcelain tub to fill up. The smell of lavender, lilacs, and rose filled the small bathroom ...

The spelling and grammar is perfect. I like the way you ended it. Your choice of words is very good, in my opinion. I like the way they talk. ...I ...

~I'd really appreciate it if you'd tell me what you think of this chapter. Thanks!~ 4 The intoxicating aroma of coffee flowed through the apartment, clinging to the walls the ...

~Please tell me what you think of this chapter. Any comments are encouraged. * Inspired by the Goo Goo Dolls, Here is Gone* :D ~ 3 All good things come ...

I like this a lot. You are very good at writing, so when you write more please PM me and let me know so I can read it. I didn't ...

2 After the pain in my neck began to go away, I managed to peel my eyes open, which wasn't a good idea and definitely wasn't worth the effort , ...

you used to say you'd love me eternity i guess an eternity is much shorter than you thought you broke my heart and you're still the one i will always ...

AW!!!! This story made me cry!! It's truly amazing, and I'm not just saying that! If only real guys were like that! :lol: I absolutely LOVE that story! I wanna ...

The cheerful candlelight danced across a variety of expressions I love the way you wrote that, it makes everything seem 100x more elegant than it already was. This story is ...