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Re: My Trigger Finger is Set
nice try though u have ot be more realistic some of the parts didnt make sense at all and some parts were ver very very sarcastic so next time when ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Into Death Valley
sorry it sucked
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: An Afterthought
nice try but honestly if u get in to that rap shit u know people wont like u honeslty sayin this fo yo won good you know and i can ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: I'm Not a 'Nobody'
og that was really really awesome at first i really thought it's some pieice of bullshit but sorry this was very cool honnestly and im preety sure whoever will read ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Lordgluzmans biography song (Rap)
AIGHT YA REAL HOMIE G HUH NICE ONE !
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: How I roll
1.I killed one in kill Calli 2.Pop em up on the floor 3.I neva went to the valley 4.I just banged on his door 5.Yea it's the king muthafuckas know ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: He's not quite ready
thAT WAS NICE
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: I can't live with out you
Hey thats was preety good actually and people are right you should not give up that easily whoever you are you are very good at this i can bet you ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: I am what I am
I THINK THIS WAS QUITE FINE NOT BAAD BUT NOT GOOD WEITHER BUT STILL THAT WAS A GOOD TRY ATLEAST BUT OTHER SONGS WILL BE WAY BETTER
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Everyone But Me
I THINK THAT WAS FINE NOT THAT BAAD AND NOT THAT GOOD EITHER BUT STILL YOU CAN KEEP IT UP AND KEEP TRYING VERY GOOD TRY NO DOUBT KEEP TRYING ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: I am what I am
(Yea) (OK) (Lets do it) 1.Bitch ya know ma name name is king Ashaa 3.The fuckin bone crusher 4.U tryna get outta the line 5.I put yo ass right back ...
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: GEE'S
OK honestly I am telling the truth no offence but the lyrics were slight weak not saying that they were bad i actually enjoyed them alot but you just need ...
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: FEAR (Death Metal)
nice danm man u can become a rock star
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: Freestyle,Rap
I'm Enjoyin da young writers 2.U know I'm a young rider 3.I got dat California LUV 4.But when I'm on da street ma homie ain't call me no rider. 5.They ...
Feb 10, 2009
