AsanteVilicia

Thank you for pointing these things out. I don't notice a lot things when I'm writing, so it's really helpful getting other people's opinions. I'll edit the repetition, and look ...

I almost freaked out at the beginning of your review; I thought you were going to say it wasn't a good read, but thank god you didn't. :) I'm currently ...

Oooh, then maybe I should write a really dramatic back story to Louis and Daniel. I'll PM when I post the next chapter, and I hope you'll give me some ...

Thanks for the edits/review. None of the friends I've shown this to have said anything about the actual writing, so it's really helpful. I think it's great you already dislike, ...

Thank you for pointing out those typos/errors. I usually never proofread, so having only that many mistakes is surprising. I copy-pasted this from the original Word file, so the words ...

nice! if you continue this, let me know! I will be continuing it.