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EDIT: Here's the rest of Chapter 1! Please let me know what you think!Daniel's Way is a novel that I am currently writing. I would like to get chapter-by-chapter critiques ...

Faces stare, but do they see?All seeing eyes overlooking the deed.Justice will come, but how long might it take?While the atrocities grow in size,Swell in number.Damn them if they will ...

Chapter 2Alright?“Mama, don’t worry. I’m fine.” I told her as she stood looking at me over her sunglasses in a way that clearly said she wasn’t so sure. “I’ll just ...