Arwen

Hello! I think you wrote a wonderful poem. It has a nice rhythm and the flow of words makes the reader sympathize with the one who's telling and living the ...

Hello! I think this is the start of a truly beautiful piece, especially the first three (or two) stanzas left me breathless. The wind 'tucking the world to bed' and ...

Hello there! I liked your poem because it's somewhat original and it has the nice concept of defining yourself through contrasts: 'not a nose, not a zit, or scar. Just ...

Hello! I enjoyed your poem as it seems playful and witty at the same time, and the circular structure brings a nice effect to the reader, leading him to the ...

Hello! Thank you all very much for your opinions on my little poem, if we can actually call it that. I would especially like to thank Suzanne for her criticism ...

Be still, my soul, when magic blossoms in your heart a meadow like a cradle whispers far beyond the horizon. Be still, my soul, the light is near, a chant ...