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Re: the grey hair
The Grey Hair Ali and Mohamed were sitting side by side in the upstairs room of Ali’s home. It was Friday and after its prayer this is where they would ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: Coca-cola
really cool. im not big on photography though. take some pics of you...you have the look. lol
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: palestinian child
he holds the stone. the wieght of his pain, that none can explain. the surface of his loss, thate we'll soon come across, that mass of his confusion, the element ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: 1st person VS. 3rd person narration
sure it is easier to create a depth in your characters using First person, and perhaps allows the reader to appreciate the characters more. yet this can be done with ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Finding my voice, using Wulthus's travel as an example
I am having trouble finding my voice, after reading these place the number of the one you like most(the first being 1, and the second 2). and plz explain why ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Things Not Seen
A delicate topic, and you seemed to delve into te victoms mind, making it easier to understand why it is so hard for victoms to fight back.
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: Autumn Winds
the seasonly love might not always be warm but it'll will always return. wonderfully written poem. 8/10
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: going home
a love lost, a love stolen, and the cost; a heart broken. a sliver of metal, his only way, to return to the love he lost that day, its frigid ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: Falling
thanx for the message, 18 seems eight years older than i feel:) love the way you allow for us to assume through the indirect implications that she is jumping to ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: My First Poem
Your eyes are like precious gems, glowing with the light of the clearest of halos, Your smile is as bright as the full moon in the midnight sky, Your hair ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Kevin Scholler
sweet pic man. can you draw someone if a were to explain him to you?
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Kevin Scholler
sweet drawing man. you got some real talent. can you draw someone if i were to describe him to you?
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Lightbulb!!
the lightbulb is off, you must have been low on ideas.lol. no im kidding its really cool, at first it seems simple but the way you placed it is genious.
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: The Dead Ship
despite the few grammatical errors the tone in th poem is fantastic, eerie voice you have.
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Meorin's soliloquy
"The old gal swayed and rocked endlessly that night. Her Mast moaning and billowing, expressing her distress. there was no delicate silhouette of horizon that divided the higher and lower ...
Apr 4, 2008
