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Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 9
%u201CWe were taught that were-creatures were to be killed on sight. That finding balance between their two halves never happened as inevitably there is some disconnect between them. Once again, ...
Nov 14, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 9
Hey niteowl. Thanks for reviewing! Compared to waking up yesterday I felt much better, less desolate and defeated, and more just lost and alone. Looking around at the glade through ...
Nov 14, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 9
Hey Mea! I'm always happy to see you here. I make myself not check for a few days after posting to prevent myself from ending up checking every 5 minutes ...
Nov 12, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 8 (Revised)
Hey Mea. , this is a really long chapter. It would be a lot easier to read and review if it was split up into two parts, just cause then ...
Oct 31, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 8 (Revised)
Hey! Thanks for taking the time to post! Although I have to say I think it was a bit heavy on the dialogue side - like 90% of the chapter ...
Oct 31, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 8 (Revised)
"Then I'll go to a temple. Priests can break curses. It's what they do!" I shouted. This brings up another point that I'm not sure if I've mentioned before or ...
Oct 30, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 8 (Revised)
Hey niteowl. Thanks again for being here. So we open again with a dream, which I think you did a few chapters back. My critique of this dream sequence is ...
Oct 30, 2018 -
Re: Ship's Mechanic (Part 1/2)
Sorry! Wrong place!
Oct 30, 2018 -
Re: Ship's Mechanic (Part 1/2)
Hey Mea! Thought I'd come return the favour. To me so far, Hestia comes across as very quiet and preferring to fade into the background and I really got the ...
Oct 30, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 7
Hey Mea. Honestly, I'd thought he was old, like properly old. But I guess 35 or so still fits with how I see him in my head. Bast is relatively ...
Oct 30, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 7
It's interesting to have Bast's perspective. I wonder what the Circle is and what else he knows about the origin of werewolves. I do find it surprising that he doesn't ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 7
Hey niteowl. Thanks once again for the review! Perhaps I should just put a thanks to you and Mea in my signature at this point haha. First off, we have ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 6
What is with these responses going wrong at the moment! I guess I was logged in too long just typing and it logged me out so I ended up posting ...
Oct 27, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 6
Well, it did it again and like an idiot I didn't copy in the moment of posting. My response wasn't any longer than the one I just posted on the ...
Oct 27, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 5
Hey Mea. Thanks for the review! Hm, so something that surprised me was Jaron's order to shift forms. I'd sort of assumed that they were like the traditional portrayal of ...
Oct 27, 2018
