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Re: Polaroid
I guess I look alright in your light, at the left-hand corner of an HDR snapshot from that semester, with my high-socked legs tangled in a mess extending down our ...
Jan 14, 2012 -
Re: An Anonymous Letter of Concern
A few weeks ago, the Cross Country team at my high school was the subject of an email to our principal. Specifically, it was about their drinking habits at a ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: That's So Gay!
Generally, I liked it. It takes a social issue and brings it directly to the foreground, with effective short lines and stanzas. However, there were a few parts that I ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: ash
Written during the harrowing state-wide power outage that has plagued Connecticut for the past 9 days. I'm still enjoying my amateurism, but, you know. I liked writing this one. Enjoy. ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: I also make music
That's a dance-y track I just finished today. And that's orchestrated. I thought someone here might like to give it a listen. If you do, enjoy. :)
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: Atlantis - Prologue
That was good. A few things: The first section was difficult to understand because of the characters' unnamedness. Actually, you did mention one: Garry, and I think you should take ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Symphony #1
I'm kind of striking out with this one. It has some cool concepts, but I'm not quite sure how to make it work. Any advice would be much-appreciated. ^_^ I’d ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: in which souls whisper in the breeze
Graverobber, the sky is ashen, dead-weighted with amber flakes, silver-- like the tongue they pried from your teeth , It seems odd to call her Graverobber, and then reference her ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: I'm a New
Hi everyone. I'm new here. I write poetry, and I used to write a lot of short stories but they have faded a bit. I like to read and I ...
Oct 21, 2011
