Armagan

but something cleverly funny popped in my head and I couldn’t resist laughing. Cleverly funny - this doesn't really work together, get rid of the cleverly maybe? from Max but ...

OK. I edited a big chunk out because it was WAY too long, anyway, butcher it, tear it to shreds! Review my work :D Thanks! Dad drove me to school, ...

I would love to review this, also, I really like what I've read so far, now to review! "Ah, life slips through our fingers," I said to Callie. She was ...

I want to review this, but i need to know something first, is this a piss take?

I'm going to be 100% honest with you, but this is only my opinion, i am not a big fan on a preface but then this is not my story, ...

All reviews are welcome, be as honest as you like, no criticism will be taken personally! “Are you sure you’re fine for tonight…” My mum had asked this question for ...

I would gladly review this! :D “Come on, or we'll be late for class.” She pulled my arm as she leaded me to our sixth period British Literature class in ...

First of all, i would just like to say i really liked this and thoroughly enjoyed it! Also, sorry if i repeat advice already given to you :lol: But, now ...

This is a story i've been writing for a few months now, i've only really shown it to a few friends. This is just chapter 1. Be brutal, i honestly ...

First I'll give my opinion overall on it, then I'll give some advice (: Well, i really enjoyed this, i felt as if i was transported into this girls mind, ...

I honestly don't think there's much i can say to improve this! So I'll just give my opinion on a few things :) The shallow people seemed to pass her ...

First of all, i am not so good at the grammer so i wont be any use there, BUT i do like to comment on the ideas used in stories. ...

Right, this is my first story, not really a story, but i would love to hear feedback, good or bad. And also, I'm not sure whether to write more or ...

First of all, I'd just like to make this clear, i thoroughly enjoyed it. I can see why some may have thought it to be confusing, but i understood it ...