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slight smile
Right, this is my first story, not really a story, but i would love to hear feedback, good or bad. And also, I'm not sure whether to write more or ...
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Question Chapter 1
This is a story i've been writing for a few months now, i've only really shown it to a few friends. This is just chapter 1. Be brutal, i honestly ...
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Question Chapter 2
All reviews are welcome, be as honest as you like, no criticism will be taken personally! “Are you sure you’re fine for tonight…” My mum had asked this question for ...
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Question Chapter 3
OK. I edited a big chunk out because it was WAY too long, anyway, butcher it, tear it to shreds! Review my work Thanks! Dad drove me to school, I ...
