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Wow I actually saw this playing in my mind! i love this sentence I'm gonna be.... ALRIGHT it was....a sudden burst of cofidence!! It was amazing! No better...... Miraculous!!!! yeah, ...

Hey, first of all this story sounds sooooo awesome. I am. Very interested I found no mistakes at all Canadian trakers. A mysterious school. I think this story has potental ...

Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome -it really depends how happy you are with ...

I love the end! He flipped off his father! I love it! Can't wait to read more ! It was great and funny!

Like always you out did your self!! I love it! Alexa sounds....like my little sister... unless i am wrong is there something between. Alexa and Gary!? Anyways I love it!!! ...

Thank you apple, I am starting to edit chapter 1 it seemed like I said lame, but I will improve it! For the other people reading you are probably thinking ...

Oh, storyweaver13 I was going to discribe the characters, next chapter it is going to be from a diffrent point of view thanks I will sure get to work on ...

Amazing, I wanted to hate the killer, but I cant he has a family he loves! Great idea, a killer with a lovable family!! I only saw one little mistake, ...

You have outdone yourself this time!! Congrats on being featured!!! I love Scars!!! Keep up the good work!!

Amazing! That was so amazing. I went back and read more of this. I actually cried at one part! I love how you go between the two stories I love ...

Amazing! I love it. Cannot wait to see what lies ahead for blad. Genius idea! Cannot wait. Without a doubt I will like this story.