Young Writers Society

This is very well written. This seems like two people who loved each other very much but through tragic miscommunication, a heart shattering breakup happened that neither of them wanted ...

You leave us on a very ominous note. It is very clear that something DOES happen to these sweet innocent girls. My guess is molestation, kidnapping, or both. These are ...

You are really able to capture the heartbreak, hopelessness, and desperation that Gabriel feels. This is a toxic relationship. Even when Denise had used Gabriel and left him behind to ...

I really like this kind of poem. It is very unique and I haven't read anything quite like this. The dialogue between the two characters tells a story. Character A ...

It seems like this haiku is about someone has fallen in love with, or became friends, with someone who has mental problems or someone or has a bad reputation and ...

What a beautiful piece of literature. I love the use of visualization. Not only is this literary artwork, but it's also literally artwork. You really encapture the boredom and the ...

I like the message in your poem. Love isn't our entire lives, it is only a part of it. While tomorrow isn't guaranteed, we can expect it and continue living ...

This shows how easily society can be swayed. Even though multiple people saw what happened, they were quickly bribed. Now, there's a wife at home with her children struggling to ...

Being able to write is indeed such a gift. When people write, it opens up an entirely new world. I get from your poem that when you are an author, ...

This poem is very straightforward, which is not a bad thing. It makes it a bit easier for the reader to understand what is going on. This is a person ...

Even though the person knows very well that the person they are dating is abusive and bad, they still feel the need to apologize. But, just because they are apologizing ...

Don't we all want a happy ending to our lives? We all want everything to be okay, to be smarter, faster, stronger, and better than what we are. We all ...

This poem is the definition of people becoming what they are raised in. The princess was not protected, she was belittled and bullied. No one praised her, they only bullied ...

This person seems to realize what they have been doing wrong. Perhaps they have been pushing others away or hurting others without realizing it. Whatever the reason, something has happened ...

I struggle with trying to keep my emotions kept up in a bottle and I know a lot of other people do too. Which is why your summary of two ...