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  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: I wish

    This is very well written. This seems like two people who loved each other very much but through tragic miscommunication, a heart shattering breakup happened that neither of them wanted ...

    Aug 10, 2022

  • You leave us on a very ominous note. It is very clear that something DOES happen to these sweet innocent girls. My guess is molestation, kidnapping, or both. These are ...

    Aug 10, 2022

  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical
    Re: My dearest Denise..

    You are really able to capture the heartbreak, hopelessness, and desperation that Gabriel feels. This is a toxic relationship. Even when Denise had used Gabriel and left him behind to ...

    Aug 10, 2022

  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Romantic
    Re: The Blooming Blue Iris

    I really like this kind of poem. It is very unique and I haven't read anything quite like this. The dialogue between the two characters tells a story. Character A ...

    Aug 10, 2022

  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Supernatural
    Re: "It"

    It seems like this haiku is about someone has fallen in love with, or became friends, with someone who has mental problems or someone or has a bad reputation and ...

    May 18, 2022

  • Other » General, General
    Re: Blank

    What a beautiful piece of literature. I love the use of visualization. Not only is this literary artwork, but it's also literally artwork. You really encapture the boredom and the ...

    May 17, 2022

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: I Fell in Love Once

    I like the message in your poem. Love isn't our entire lives, it is only a part of it. While tomorrow isn't guaranteed, we can expect it and continue living ...

    May 17, 2022

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Satire
    Re: The Tea-Seller

    This shows how easily society can be swayed. Even though multiple people saw what happened, they were quickly bribed. Now, there's a wife at home with her children struggling to ...

    May 17, 2022

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: i am the author of my own fate

    Being able to write is indeed such a gift. When people write, it opens up an entirely new world. I get from your poem that when you are an author, ...

    May 12, 2022

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: Reminders

    This poem is very straightforward, which is not a bad thing. It makes it a bit easier for the reader to understand what is going on. This is a person ...

    Apr 25, 2022

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: i'm sorry but

    Even though the person knows very well that the person they are dating is abusive and bad, they still feel the need to apologize. But, just because they are apologizing ...

    Apr 19, 2022

  • Poetry » Literature, Other
    Re: From Books

    Don't we all want a happy ending to our lives? We all want everything to be okay, to be smarter, faster, stronger, and better than what we are. We all ...

    Apr 19, 2022

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Evil : Not born but made

    This poem is the definition of people becoming what they are raised in. The princess was not protected, she was belittled and bullied. No one praised her, they only bullied ...

    Apr 19, 2022

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: An escape from the biting cold

    This person seems to realize what they have been doing wrong. Perhaps they have been pushing others away or hurting others without realizing it. Whatever the reason, something has happened ...

    Apr 18, 2022

  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General
    Re: Know its valid.

    I struggle with trying to keep my emotions kept up in a bottle and I know a lot of other people do too. Which is why your summary of two ...

    Apr 9, 2022

"Perhaps it is better to wake up after all, even to suffer, rather than to remain a dupe to illusions all one's life."
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening