Young Writers Society

Hello! Ari here. First impressions: this is a darkly interesting piece. I like the simplicity of your descriptions; they make the poem even more punchy and disturbing. I've found that, ...

Hello! Ari here. I think this is a very nicely written chapter. I haven't read any of your previous chapters yet, but this one definitely helped me get a good ...

Ahhh this is awesome! It's got such a different vibe to it and I love it. Photographing abandoned buildings is a very specific hobby, too. The descriptions for it are ...

Hello hello! Ari here. This is a fairly short poem, so I'll keep my review short as well :) The poem has a sort of nice overlying feel to it, ...

Hello hello! Ari here. I...don't know if I'm exactly qualified to review this work as I'm not a particularly accomplished poet, but I'll try anyway. First impressions: it feels like ...

Hello! Ari here. I haven't read your previous chapters yet, but this one does seem to give a little backstory into the others so I think I have a decent ...

Hello! Ari here. Starting off, I think this chapter is a little lacking. The dialogue is good, but there is hardly any description of the characters or the setting. “You ...

Hello! Ari here. I thought it was interesting how you listed all the different attributes of the tortoise in your poem, like how they inspired the Romans to build the ...

Hello! Ari here. I haven't read the other chapters yet, but I'm really liking your writing style so far. It's very good at conveying the emotions and mannerisms of your ...

Hello! Ari here for a quick review. I haven't read the other chapters yet, but I can tell just from this one that there's a lot of interesting world-building going ...

Hello hello! Ari here. I'm super late to the party(as usual) but this showed up on my recommended page and I've been really enjoying this series so far, so I ...

Hello! Ari here. I am thoroughly enjoying this series so far. It is well fleshed-out and really seems like you spent a lot of time working on the worldbuilding. I ...

Hello hello! Ari here with a quick review. Okay, so first things first--I'm guessing from the way that this is worded it's about the pandemic. Especially the lines: 'Illness. Loneliness. ...

Hello! Ari here with another review. I am really enjoying this series so far. This was a shorter chapter, but no less interesting. There was a bit of added detail ...

Hello! Ari here. I'm really enjoying this series so far. It has been very well-written and the characters are developing nicely. This chapter in particular really showcases the progression of ...