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Jigsaw>>You know they are.

Well lots of salt would make it taste bad too. So you could still use that as a way to get at em.

True that.

I think maybe Nate's been watching Casino Royale. Good movie. Anyways, I had to go with Bond... It's the coolest.

This is kinda funny but I think the last three lines sound a little unbalanced. Anyways, next time, add some extra salt to these people's food. That might speed up ...

This is good writing. I don't really have anything bad to say about it. If I had to suggest something though I'd like to see conversations between Brian and the ...

Emma>> Nice. Me in my Zeppelin hat. I look a little young but oh well.

I tried to make a map of the central building but it didn't work out. And I was thinking about how we're getting out of here. Anyone have any ideas? ...

Brewer heard the shots from his position near the road. He started scanning the walls and windows for movement. Something moved slowly past the second story windows. He couldn't tell ...

I don't know how much I'll be able to add since Brewer's not in the main building right now but I'll post. Someone inside is gunna have to move this ...

Second paragraph. Show us, don't tell. The story could be way cool if you showed us. Also, rape would sound better than 'personal pleasure', to me anyways. It'd be more ...

It was a very hot day. The weather report had said it was twenty-five degrees [s]Celsius[/s] , but it felt like much more. The streets were packed with irritable suits ...

I just got done with 20,000 Leagues. Now I'm readin a book on D Day. It's called "D Day", by David Horwarth or something. It's very cool. You all should ...

I think I saw the fences in your profile on some website a long time ago. I like the coaster, the flag, the eye, and the fences the best... Nifty ...

So I come back from a decent sized absence and nothing's going on... Let's get goin.