Ares

^Is Kay, and therefore amazing in 3 different languages

Lightly revise, and expand/elaborate. And space it out more.

I think everbody already got evrything. Nice work though.

I hate it when good pens die.

Lives in Michigan

Purple Spatula?

This...SUCKS! I have no money for all these upgrades in game systems! No Xbox 360 or PSP for MH, I'm stuck with the freakin original Xbox. Dangit! How will I ...

Uh oh. Idunno if all my helpful coding works on YWS Dark. Lemme switch to Light and see if everything's there. EDIT: Woo. Thank God. If you look at my ...

Anthony Simmons trudged through the snow, glancing up on occasion to glare at the Christmas decorations [s]that surrounded him[/s] surrounding him . The blow-up Santas and Rudolphs mocked him with ...

Rei said most of it. The only thing I would add is to come up with some other names for Richard, like Mr. Wells, etc.

Oh sorry. And thanks for fixing everything. -MH

The Government probably would've disabled the computers, so Reuben wouldn't have been able to do that. Apart from that, you over use the word WIRE way too much, and the ...

I know YWS Dark isn't done but this might help you guys complete it. -Under the user's avatar, where it says Gender, Age, Country, etc, it reads Gender: Gender: Male/Female, ...

shaking my head to shake free the droplets inching down my face --Change it. --May I suggest shaking my head to rid my hair of the sweat droplets, or somehting ...

Nice. The Capital MIRACLE was...odd. I kinda thought rain in here was a little 'cheesy'. others, like you, their life starts with pain, so much to cry for, their tears ...