Ares

I have a lot, probably about forty or so, mostly novels, some guidebooks, a few text books, some handheld type stuff you could stick in your pocket. It's great. Having ...

That used to be on my friends myspace...

Home Sweet Home--Motley Crue

*Just got internet access* Haha. I did everything... 8) Anyways, your welcome MM.

I saw these earlier, and, as usual, everyone looks marvelous. Even Dan. :lol:

*Marks calender*

It was a sleepy September [s]Monday[/s] morning [s]in September[/s] when Joy [s]Montane[/s] unlocked the door to a deli she and her sister, Linda, worked in. The air was slightly chilled ...

I agree with Xanthan. Other than that, you might wanna try to balance it out a little more, and tweak the ending. People having trouble sleeping usually don't just drift ...

When I went to a Seneca College campus just north of Toronto to do an admissions test for the veterinary technician program Run on! --- Now, ok, I like the ...

The ending's a bit foggy, but apart from that it's a nice beginning. Some elaboration, spacing, and revision would do it some good though.

Sam gave you a good idea. I can't do long stories either, so I'm just trying a novel of short stories.

I...don't get it.

If you're gunna rhyme at the end, rhyme the whole time. Also, in this is information going down the drain. Information is a bad word to use. Other than that, ...

Nice. And although I don't know much about poetry, I'd write it like this: Statistically, you're more likely to meet God on a dark night by the river than you ...

Sweetness. Or coolness, ya know. That's great stuff.