Ares

I demand that Lama change his sig! And I think that principal should be slapped.

Nice pics.

Well...Idunno. But you give us a First:, so where are the Second:, Third:, and Fourths:?

This has already been helpful... Please, continue it. Thanks, MH

I think maybe you should work on muscle structure. That Spartan looks pretty cool though.

Take out BANG. Try to rhyme the whole time if you're gunna in the beginning. Yea, Claudette got the rest.

Whoa. This is a pretty active thread isn't it? Jack, DD, Chandini>> Thanks guys. Muse>> I wish it was curly sometimes, but everyone seems to like it... Fand, Liz, Wiggy>>Cool ...

Tada!

Haziness sounds weird in the first paragraph but I like the end of the second paragraph. We use M4s nowadays. It's the newer M16. Why is one of the Rangers ...

It all looks about good to me. The climbing thing was a little confusing, made me wonder what his motives were...but it's late here so maybe I missed something... And ...

I said dialogue but...idunno...I've never really thought about it and analyzed myself. I think it's time I put some writing up on YWS though, so maybe you guys can tell ...

I think the Arcade King about settled it.

His reign was cruel and hard until another Titan came and imprisoned the Infernal Titan in a nether-cage in the void. Not so slick. Try, The Infernal Titan's cruel, hard ...

Hey Bob, that was my response! And welcome, Shafter.

Good start... I of course am not in it, since you hate me. But it's still a good start. :lol: It had a nice flow...