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Forcing back the group of people who all seemed to be shouting different things, Use some dialogue on the offier's part here. You could extend the piece by adding some ...

Let's start it.

1911 Colt 45. Grenades could come in handy.

These are nice but I like your old B&W ones better.

I know. I'm saying I think it would be better if you did rhyme.

A sawed off shotgun is more efffective at close quarters than a regular shotgun.

Research pistols and see which ones you like the most. If your guard has no resttrictions, he might carry smoke grenades or flash-bangs for cover/ distraction.

Snow killed the flow in the last line of the first stanza. I didn't really like the third stanza either. Too much of the same words. And the very last ...

8/10. Suddenly looks cooler. Does my avie move on your computer like it does mine?

Dude! It's Jimmy Page playin guitar w/ John Bonhams head floating nearby I don't get why nobody likes it... Gosh. Alright. Nice song but no good graphics. Plus I'm a ...

Sure the last line rhymes, but it's rhyming with the same word! Anyways, this reminds me of something I'd write. The words are heavy, and the subject is too, but ...

We've got like eight planets now? One has life? Another might've had life and still has potential? That sounds like good odds to me. Considering how many planets there are...

Usually I stop reading if the book's bad, so I don't have any that I can really list here... ...EXCEPT Tears of a Tiger. We had to read it in ...

I haven't read very much of them at all but I'm thinking I might. What I did read (when my friend had a copy) seemed pretty good. How many are ...

It's a pretty sweet book about the author's life before, during, and after the Vietnam war. It also has some to do with the other characters and their lives. I ...