Ares

I do homework. And myspace. And this place. I try to read when I can. I like Airsoft and soccer. Hiking and walking is up on my list too. Roadtrips. ...

Yea, that's how I was imagining it towards the end. Anyways, nice maps. On the second one I'm at the wall, so I'll cover everyone from there as we leave.

Very Adam-ish. 300.5/10

It's up to you and FS.

Sounds good Jack. And I think if we're gunna get any more teams it should just be a second EAGLES. Also, why can't we just capture Banks and deliver him ...

Purdy cool. 8/10.

Brewer checked his clip and settled into his position, scanning for any hostiles. "Look out, I've got movement, no available shots though."

Discuss. Right now, we need to figure out what we're doing with this complex, and how long it's gunna last. I'm under the impression that some of us are covering ...

Brewer slid into the hangar and patted his comrade on the shoulder."I'm gunna go farther left and try to get another angle on those window shooters. Stay here." With that, ...

OOC: Whoa. Brewer grunted as he threw Caldwell up onto his shoulder. Then he drew his sidearm with his free hand and sprinted to where the majority of the team ...

The operatives began to emerge from the plane. Two colombians in a truck started shooting. Kobi and Brewer returned fire as Holland, Foxx, and Frealand ran to a low wall ...

If this were in the form of a novel, it would kick ass, but it's more like a summary of a novel which doesn't kick quite so much ass. Keep ...

The flow's broken up a little sometimes and occasionally the rhyming sounds forced but it's still cool. I liked it, especially the alternative history idea and most of the rhyming.

Well this is interesting. Potential it has. Add more and revise a little, it'd be pretty darn cool. I'll PM you with who won the contest, sorry it took me ...

Good story. Could use some editing, revising, and research. For instance, a CIA operative probably wouldn't work alone, in this instance anyways, and he'd have something better than a mag ...