Areida

Hey Valentine! This is the first thing I've read of yours, and I'm impressed. Good work! Here are a few nitpicks for you, since I don't have any big complaints. ...

Hey Tranquility! Just wanted to leave a quick comment to tell you I really like the sunflower comparison. I don't think that roses are overrated, but I certainly think that ...

I haven't done any critiquing the last year or so, and so while getting back in the swing of things this weekend, I've stuck to short stories and the occasional ...

I'm pretty useless at critiquing poetry, so take my opinion with a grain of salt. I don't really understand what you're trying to accomplish with this poem. It just reads ...

Hey Hiadel! Looks like you've been around YWS for a few months now, so I hope you're still enjoying it. Good to have you! Here are my thoughts on this ...

I really like the silouhettes of the kids playing in the tree. The way you drew the leaves is really cool too; it reminds me of something you'd see in ...

Hey bonnie! I know you said not to comment on the fists (they're so little! :)) or the scarf (which sort of reminds me of one of those collars you ...

Hey VitaminCakes! The colors in all of these are really nice, but I'd recommend playing with the composition of your photos a bit more to see if you can capture ...

I'm pretty useless at critiquing poetry, but I liked the trend of robot-isms throughout the poem to go along with the title. Some of the phrases were especially good. I ...

Chocolate and apples - a girl after my own heart! Hey smashles, welcome to YWS! I'm Areida, but you can call me Ari (lots of people around here do). If ...

Hi Nikki! Welcome to YWS! I'm glad you decided to come and check out the site; you won't be sorry you did. Which RPing site did you come from?

Hi Embee! Your name is really fun to say. I saw your welcome thread on the new posts feed thingy, and after saying it three times I figured I'd better ...

Hey Isha! I recently reviewed your story, "The Day He Hung Up," and I think some of my comments on that piece apply here as well. So here's a big ...

Hi Tranquility! I'm really not much for critiquing poetry, so I can't offer expertise. All I've got is an opinion, so just take mine with a grain of salt. ;) ...

Hey Kaedee! It looks like you've already gotten some feedback, but here are my thoughts on this piece. The Good * Meryl is a cool name. Mrs. Streep shouldn't get ...