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Elaina 4:50pm "Oh," I said, not really sure what else to say. I didn't know any of them either. Just Kevin. And saying you knew Kevin was like saying you ...

Most of my really good short stories turn out being from a first person perspective, but I use third person as well. Whatever strikes my fancy is fine, really. My ...

Day 1. 4:23 p.m. Elaina Yielding to Bernard's request, Joanna and I walked away from where Kevin lay, with Bernard tending to him. I could still hear him cursing a ...

Day 1. 4:02 p.m. Elaina. Three down... God only knew how many more to go. I looked down at the sword in my hand and shuddered. I wanted to wipe ...

Ooh, this sounds so fun! I wanna play. Another one that's fun is what my sisters and I call "relling." It's a combination of running and yelling, where you see ...

I'm disappointed. Before it was like, "Yeah! Dumbledore's the MAN!" Somehow his being gay just makes some of his attributes less cool. Point fingers and call me a homophobe if ...

NAME: Elaina Maria Estrella Velasquez AGE: 19 HEIGHT: 5'5" WEIGHT: 135 EYES: Black HAIR: Black PHYSIQUE: Solid. She was heavy as a child, so now she's careful not to put ...

Think about what you're trying to convey in the scene. Don't write it just for the sake of writing it - there needs to be something specific communicated to the ...

The first one is all right, but I think it would work better as an illustration rather than a stand-alone photograph. I don't like cats, but this one looks professionally-done. ...

Emo poetry is bad because it sends me spiraling into unfathomable depths of despair that cause me to fear I will never escape from their malicious, mercilous clutches to see ...

I'm glad someone else felt the same way about Gary Oldman as Sirius, Crysi. XD

*palm/forehead* Oy vey. What next?

I liked this. I can relate, not because I'm in love with a musician, but because I have some really good friends who are amazing pianists and violinists. So I ...

Honestly, there were times when I used to worry that someday you'd just run out of brilliance, but you're still as full of awesomeness and delicious prose as ever. This ...

Ooh, I really liked this. Partly because I completely adore the word hubris, but also because it flows nicely and has good imagery as well. It's one of those poems ...