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  • Lounge, The Re: 2009 YWS Awards Winners!

    I am just as proud of No Consensus today as I was back in September of '09. *sniff sniff*

    May 13, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Some pics :)

    Hey there! I agree with everyone about the first picture being just stunning. It's like you've captured this tiny moment in time, and as soon as that water drips off ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Beach mixed media

    Wow, that's really cool, bumblebee. It doesn't really remind me of a beach at first, but once I thought about it did a bit more so. The colors look like ...

    May 7, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Horror: To Be Pretty

    I agree with your first two reviewers that you could definitely use some more detail in this piece. I got the feeling that I knew what you were going for ...

    May 3, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Wrong Eyes

    Hey Sela! This was a really well-written story. I was interested the whole way through, and found myself leaning forward toward the end, wanting to know what was going to ...

    May 3, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Handwriting: Cursive or Unjoined?

    I use both. My cursive is really surprisingly very nice, considering I never followed any of the rules when learning, and I hold my pencil the wrong way. :D

    May 3, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Forever&Always #Prologue

    Hi Ikafe! Here are my thoughts on this piece: Introduction I know it's tempting to give a few basic facts about the story beforehand, but your story can do that ...

    Apr 30, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Lost and Found

    Hey, Forestqueen808! Let me first say that I am a big fan of romance. I like it when the guy gets the girl (or vice versa). I like happy endings. ...

    Apr 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Edited version of The Monster has Escaped (now Schitzo)

    Cutting is a serious issue, so kudos to you for being willing to cover some sensitive material. However, when dealing with these kinds of issues in this way, you have ...

    Apr 30, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Sketch of a guy ^_^

    Hey Skins! This looks great! I'm obsessed with texturing in hair, and this looks really cool. I'm also a big fan of the way you drew his nose and the ...

    Apr 29, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Please. Not Another One.

    Hey Creative Freak! I agree with Jas - check out some poetry to get an idea of how it's different from just a string of phrases and emotions. Even if ...

    Apr 29, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Law of the Street [R for language]

    Hi DirrtyMoney! No need to be shy; everyone here is ridiculously friendly. We don't bite (I'm pretty sure the only ones who do have had their shots anyway :P). I ...

    Apr 29, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: tiepolo's hound -- Kylan's NaPoWriMo Thread

    Your frustration is unwarranted, Kylan - these are great. I recently finished The Poisonwood Bible , so "congo" was particularly relevant to me. I enjoyed the first stanza the most. ...

    Apr 29, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Navita's NaPo Poems

    Hey Navita! I've seen you around the site doing some awesome reviews lately, so I was excited to see that you had a NaPo thread. :) All I really have ...

    Apr 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: - Ryuzaki -

    My first thought was that he was grumpy because his piece of cake was too small. XD The only thing that seemed "off" to me was his chin. It looks ...

    Apr 29, 2010


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