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Re: 2009 YWS Awards Winners!
I am just as proud of No Consensus today as I was back in September of '09. *sniff sniff*
May 13, 2010 -
Re: Some pics :)
Hey there! I agree with everyone about the first picture being just stunning. It's like you've captured this tiny moment in time, and as soon as that water drips off ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Beach mixed media
Wow, that's really cool, bumblebee. It doesn't really remind me of a beach at first, but once I thought about it did a bit more so. The colors look like ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Horror: To Be Pretty
I agree with your first two reviewers that you could definitely use some more detail in this piece. I got the feeling that I knew what you were going for ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: The Wrong Eyes
Hey Sela! This was a really well-written story. I was interested the whole way through, and found myself leaning forward toward the end, wanting to know what was going to ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Handwriting: Cursive or Unjoined?
I use both. My cursive is really surprisingly very nice, considering I never followed any of the rules when learning, and I hold my pencil the wrong way. :D
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Forever&Always #Prologue
Hi Ikafe! Here are my thoughts on this piece: Introduction I know it's tempting to give a few basic facts about the story beforehand, but your story can do that ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Lost and Found
Hey, Forestqueen808! Let me first say that I am a big fan of romance. I like it when the guy gets the girl (or vice versa). I like happy endings. ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Edited version of The Monster has Escaped (now Schitzo)
Cutting is a serious issue, so kudos to you for being willing to cover some sensitive material. However, when dealing with these kinds of issues in this way, you have ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Sketch of a guy ^_^
Hey Skins! This looks great! I'm obsessed with texturing in hair, and this looks really cool. I'm also a big fan of the way you drew his nose and the ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: Please. Not Another One.
Hey Creative Freak! I agree with Jas - check out some poetry to get an idea of how it's different from just a string of phrases and emotions. Even if ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: The Law of the Street [R for language]
Hi DirrtyMoney! No need to be shy; everyone here is ridiculously friendly. We don't bite (I'm pretty sure the only ones who do have had their shots anyway :P). I ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: tiepolo's hound -- Kylan's NaPoWriMo Thread
Your frustration is unwarranted, Kylan - these are great. I recently finished The Poisonwood Bible , so "congo" was particularly relevant to me. I enjoyed the first stanza the most. ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: Navita's NaPo Poems
Hey Navita! I've seen you around the site doing some awesome reviews lately, so I was excited to see that you had a NaPo thread. :) All I really have ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: - Ryuzaki -
My first thought was that he was grumpy because his piece of cake was too small. XD The only thing that seemed "off" to me was his chin. It looks ...
Apr 29, 2010
