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Re: His mothers Ring Prt.1
I guess this is dead so... This is spam, SIC. Please refrain from commenting on your own work unless you are responding to a critiquer or posting an update in ...
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Re: Bits & Pieces: Agatha
Hi Suz! I haven't read Party Killers , though it's definitely on my list. :) Regardless, this works as a snippet. I know there are a lot of people who ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Fantasizing
Usually when I'm reading and commenting on a piece on YWS, even if it's really really good, I always kind of half-wish that it were just a little shorter, because ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Azaleas for Susie
See you never know how much something really means to you untill you lose it. Definitely. I have a thing about appreciating family, and it always seems to manifest itself ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: For Matty [Edited 3/21/08]
Hey JFW! Thanks for leaving me the link. It's always nice to have some requests waiting around for me, whenever I actually get around to critiquing things. I was very ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Teen Girl Beaten; Posted on YouTube
This is disgusting. I hope they are tried and punished as adults. They deserve jail time. These kinds of situations make me all the more grateful for my martial arts ...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Grammatical Errors In Public
Bummerrrrrrrrrr.
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Grammatical Errors In Public
*laughs* Ohh that is classic. Did you get a picture of it, Colly??
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Ugh, I totally sympathize. It is NO. FUN. So I'm happy for you and your progress! Feel free to rant to me at any time about the utterly suck-tastic nature ...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Grammatical Errors In Public
On a local dry cleaner's sign: DAILY SPECIALS EVERY DAY ... the heck???
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Hey Fand, there's less of you!!! Yay! Congrats! :D
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Truth's Dawning
Hey, Smiley! I don't think I've seen you around before, and it looks like this is your first post, so welcome to YWS! I'm Areida, but you can call me ...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Anniversary
Hi Ginger! Not a bad piece you've got here, but not a particularly excellent one either. I didn't feel any kind of rhythm along the way, and some of your ...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Foreign Markets: 1x02 "The Package" /P
Mm, baking soda for breakfast is my FAVE-UH-RIT. With gay bars on the side, please. SUNSHINE (nodding) I do, Lena--spiritual food. I noticed the other night that you were very ...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Foreign Markets: 1x01 "Pilot / Alpha Dogs" /P
Yeah! We're angry, not retarded! And Lena's milkshakes totally brought all the boys to the kitchen. Hehehhee, I so want to see this acted out. I'm glad you're not asking ...
Apr 12, 2008
