Areida

I think they were asking if the file size allowance could be increased. I have a couple of avatars that I really like but they're over 10 MB and still ...

Does he hate the French too?

She surely is! Muse is most definitely the official shmex of the whole YWS! 'Cept that means I getta be the Pwincess. *grins*

Yo yo! Erm.. hi. I'm Areida, but you can call me Ari. Does the YWS not rock your socks?

*shoves all the other clamoring fans out of the way* No, marry ME, Jack!

Does your computer love me? I love my computer but I think it's in love with your computer. Jack... hee... hee hee. You're hot!!

^ ^ ^ States the obvious

^ ^ ^ Thinks I have a spiffy avatar. *beams*

Ooh! Ooh! I wanna be in a story! Make one with me in it!

I'm not especially fond of it either. Right now it's really slow and pretty much nothing out of the ordinary. Also, I suggest a little work on your dialogue, because ...

Very dark, and sort Tim Burton-esque because of the dash of morbid humour. I liked your images (spiders, cheese, little kids); they were effective. The only thing I'd change would ...

It was good. Nothing especially life altering or exceptionally original, but you got the point across in a short, succinct manner. Nice.

Dang. Good gravy, Sam, that was one of your greatest Hourglasses. The only nitpick I have is that the beginning seemed a bit too contemporary, but I'm not really sure ...

^ ^ ^ Has a spiffy avatar

Hey, I'm Areida, but you can just call me Ari. I know what you mean about intimidating... you should read some of Jack's (Firestarter) poetry. :shock: Anyway, hope to see ...