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Hi sportgurl! Snoink is right - From what I've read quoted in the old reviews, to what you have posted now, you are definitely making progress. Snoink seems to have ...

Hey BBB! Sorry it's taken me eight gajillion million years to get around to commenting on this. I do see that you've gotten one of Cal's yummy critiques, so naturally ...

You two are generally my favorite people in the universe. Seriously, though, y'all's critique make me giggle and clap and want to write more. If not for Calculus and a ...

*adopts* I think you're going to find a lot of fans. XD The fangirl to male-romance-writer ratio is rather large here. So true. You're going to fit right in. So ...

Banned for banning me for a lame reason.

Banned for thinking David Cook is overrated.

Hey Trident! Finally getting to your other request! You didn't disappoint, either; this was chock-full of lovely, lovely dialogue, so I thank you for not posting something that would torture ...

I haven't written fluff in ages, but if you'd look at this one for me, I'd be ever-so-grateful. :D Crazy Little Thing I

So, in order: * Giant Jesus Fish. *gigglesnort* * Hooray for show-don't-tell character contrast! She started down the first step, with her hand in the air, searching for the railing. ...

Hey Trident! Sorry it's taken me a thousand and one nights to get to reading and commenting on your tale (haha, get it? two shakes of a lamb's tail - ...

Goodliness: "loner with friends" Oh-so-true. I love how much this reeks of real life. Oftentimes that's difficult, to write so honestly, even painful, depending on who you are and what ...

I am having way too much fun reading these. The title is great too, though I haven't made the connection yet. I'm sure it will be brilliant, though. :D “What’s ...

Dude... that's big. :shock: It definitely needs to be scaled down; I can't see a thing as it is now. Even after I copied it into another program and made ...

From one extemper to another: HECKS YES! High fives all around for the awesomeness of the Sam! I know some of your critiquers aren't fully getting it, but please, please, ...

Interesting. I'm curious about how this is going to turn out. Some random-ish comments: The burnt red paint on the door was pealing like a flakey scab. Pealing/flakey - - ...