Areida

My grandfather (Papa), wants his to say, "I told you I was sick."

Zero to Hero- the Hercules Soundtrack

That's true... I can think of more than one book that I read and really liked as I was reading it, but when I thought back on it realized how ...

Areida, "schism" is in the dictionary. Not the way we use it in Rhetoric... *laughs* Whenever somebody does a good job on a speech or something and we're clapping, we ...

Snoink- It's Jack Prelutsky. I love that guy too. My favourites: Shel Silverstein for when I'm hyper and weird, and Homer the rest of the time.

Hooray!! I was worried you would be tsking me for cheesiness and/or triteness, but instead you actually liked it! I loved the 'let's go terrorize Flora, or something' line, made ...

Shneaky and/or shneaky woo shmex/shmexy/ooh la la shmex lurve/lurvnoe/lurvely schism

Double Violin Concerto for two violins, strings, and continuo in A minor- Antonio Vivaldi Ooh, catchy name...

2/10 because that's Sureal's avvie and so I get confused.

Ooh, I like this. You make it very clear that this is a fantasy story, but do it in a different way. The characters are so much more personable, so ...

Wow, you were only eleven when you wrote this? I liked it a lot, and now I like it even more knowing that you wrote it at that age. It ...

A good start, but everything moved along really quickly. She went from being a little 6yr old (?) to more like an eight or nine year old. Several years had ...

Have at it. :D

Ooh, sorry, forgot to mention: for those of you that don't know, the history is in the prologue. If you read that, Boni, I promise it will make a lot ...

A/N: I've been working on this on and off since I first started it, and I think this is definitely better than what I had before. All critiques are appreciated. ...