Areida

I think this poem would have done more for me if someone would have recited it to me. Since I got started on this site, I've lost most of my ...

^ Other Fiction: Minor Contribution A very amusing piece.. :lol:

See, I'm clueless. Until the end, I thought that Faithful was a spoon too, hee hee. But a fork might make it all the better, like Snoink said... I really ...

...Yeah, but what about Flower? And Thumper? Thumper pretty much rocks my socks. Anyway, welcome to the YWS! I'm Areida, but you can call me Ari if you want. PM ...

I like the message, but I'm not much liking the way it's written. I don't feel a rhythm, and it feels a touch abstract. I think that with more imagery, ...

I think Sarah caught all the problems I had in terms of phrasing, grammar, etc., but other than that, I really enjoyed this. I agree with Brian that you could ...

Hey, Ginny! I'm from Texas, and we just had a drought, so I can't really relate with the rainy thing. But we do have plenty of wind here. :D I'm ...

Oooooooh... pretty Sam! It looks very soft and fluffy and I like it. :D

7/10 The first one works best on its own, but you gained points for quoting our lovely Snoink. :D

I'm sorry, but this really did nothing for me. We know nothing about these characters, and you're not making us care that one of them is dying. It moves so ...

I don't really have a preference on chapter lengths because I never stop when the chapters stop anyway. When I'm reading a really good book I'll find a good stopping ...

That pig is bloody adorable... *snugs*

...A deer, a female deer. Ray, a drop of golden suuuuuun!!! Never thought you'd be serenaded, didja? Well, I'm just weird like that, so there you have it. :P I'm ...

All hail Duskykins the Lovely!! Congrats, m'dear, you've earned it.

Wooow... I like. Surprisingly, I never got confused with where they were in terms of time. It made sense to me in the last one that he was thinking about ...