Areida

Trailing down her elegant green dress was a loose braid, small peridot butterflies woven into the blonde locks. She wore an elegant green dress, its colour heightened by the blonde ...

Well, maybe some people just dislike being informed. :mrgreen: Anyway. Tweaking is good.

Arvy... You're such a goober... And if you'll go back a page or two you'll see that I do straighten my hair from time to time. It's naturally wavy, though, ...

Areida's going to die if another person hates on Jane Austen. Must. Continue. To. Breathe. :shock: * Beast , Donna Jo Napoli. Scared me out of my wits with all ...

4/10 Poor lil guy looks like he's suffering from an ear infection. :(

1. Pop/Rock 2. Oldies 3. Classical 4. Other 5. Country 6. Jazz And nothing else gets a rank. :P I'm currently stuck on Goo Goo Dolls, Gavin DeGraw, and 3 ...

That's the vibe I'm getting too.

"An Unquiet Mind: A Memoir of Moods and Madness", Dr. Kay Redfield Jamison. :P But I think you get the idea...

I was sad that it ended. It was amusing me, even if Dunce #1 was starting to get on my nerves. I think the problem with her was that she ...

I like the ending, but the piece as a whole just rubs me the wrong way for some reason. I think it's because I have a good friend who, when ...

Ooh, yeah. A lot of times younger guys are so mean to girls they like. So maybe she hates his guts because he's always teasing her or messing up her ...

Aww... anonymous Valentine-ing would be quite adorable. Or he could send her a note that says, "Do you like me? Check yes or no." Or he could say it really ...

I'm Areida, but you can call me Ari. The YWS is very addictive... Sometimes I have to physically restrain myself from getting on the computer. :P Anyway, hope you enjoy ...

Guam? Cool! (For you non-informed peeps, Guam is an island located in the North Pacific Ocean about 3/4 of the way from Hawaii to the Philippines) I'm from Texas, so ...

You're quite sickening, Snoink. I don't think I know a more thorough critiquer, and you can write. You're disgusting. I think all the little things were covered, but I quite ...