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Hey Veritas! So - definitely a controversial piece you've got going here. Unfortunately, I don't feel like your style does justice to the big topic you've decided to tackle. When ...

Hey Jelly! I especially like the foggy-looking bridge photograph, and the one of the building with the big statue out front. The flower ones, although they're nice, don't have a ...

He's a bad boy. It makes for a good story, at least! I'm with you, though - if it came to a choice between the creepy Phantom in the basement ...

Awww, I really liked this! Normally I'm not a huge fan of poetry - I either have to be in the right mood to read the right piece at the ...

'Rina! I hate you for not finishing this yet! You're a dirty, dirty liar and I wish all kinds of awful things upon you until you finish this, pronto stat ...

Hi shiney1! This is totally cute. It's funny - you always see these floating around the web, but I don't think I've ever thought about what kind of work it ...

All great stuff! Thanks, Nate!

Hey there Dragongirl - I think someone else already mentioned it, but I highly agree that you should change up your spacing to make each of your stanzas four lines ...

Hey lovelyheart - I just did a review on your first chapter, so I figured I'd stop in and check out the second one to see how things progressed here. ...

Hey there lovelyheart - So here's my thing. You say in your description of this novel that it's about a girl dealing with her parents' divorce and finding love and ...

Hi there, No need to apologize for working with material that isn't all sunshine and happiness - poetry is a great place to work through life's darkest corners, to figure ...

Overall - loved it. I thought your sense of detail and pacing were both spot-on. Because it was so good, however, I have just a few little nit-picks for you ...

Hey Mizz - thanks for the tips! I'm kind of a destroyer of point-and-shoots because I take so many pictures (I go through one or two every year) but now ...

Hi Jessa! So I guess from your note at the bottom and all the congratulations that you're getting married - so congratulations! That's a big deal; I wish you well. ...

Hi Jane! I agree with KatTrain, that this was more of a release than a crafted explanation of how you're feeling. And while raw emotion certainly has its place, the ...