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My dad's fantastic. He's always there when I need him, and he works so hard to give the best to my sisters and I. My mom... well... she's quite the ...

Just a question: haven't any of you LOTR haters had to read books like the Odyssey and the Scarlett Letter in school? I'm wondering because the way you talk about ...

I'm not too sure how I feel about the end, but I reeeeally like the beginning. A lot of times it gets on my nerves when people can't pick either ...

You really should expand this... Make it seem a little less rushed, use those great parody sayings where you leave nothing unmocked. This made me smile, but I think it ...

My turn to echo all the praise. This poem was great... Like I just said in a crit of something else a few minutes ago, I love it when poetry ...

I think bob covered it pretty well (he's just cool like that). I thought it was interesting, but maybe a bit rushed. I'm no poet myself, but the thing that ...

I'm happy. I don't have to worry about feeding or educating or clothing myself. I don't have to worry about when my next meal will me or if I'll have ...

I'm not going to vote until I see Munich and Walk the Line , because the only others I've seen are the new Harry Potter and Narnia, lol. And while ...

Thank you! I've been trying to write more about things that I know about, things that have happened to me, etc. Just life experience in general. So I guess it's ...

I'll make a mental note. How about Boni's nifty? Or really awesome? Or fun? Or just plain great? :D

Haha... My math teacher says behoove too! Awesome. :D

Welcome! Boni_Bee is cooooool... Anyway, welcome to the YWS, partner! (And I'm totally allowed to say that because I live in Texas and I love to mock the hicks in ...

About the quotes, I love quotes... and I feel they add something to the atmosphere of your piece. I do too, almost like another dimension to the writing. I mean, ...

I read it again, and I have to agree with *singsoffkey*. Those two lines could be sold to Dove or Hershey's or Godiva or See's... Oh gravy... I soo need ...

I love saying deoxyribonucleic acid... We had this joke in my Biology class last year that we were all going to name our first child Deoxribonucleicacid just so we could ...