Areida

OOC Question: What kind of group is it that is being mistaken? Are they all just happening to be travelling the same way, or are they old friends or are ...

I enjoy living in a small town, but big cities are fun to visit. I'd live in one if I had to, only for college though, but I'm definitely going ...

C.S. Lewis isn't just for children! :) 'Till We Have Faces is absolutely amazing... I'm so glad you agree. :D But then, I don't think I've ever read a review ...

Very good overall. A lot of times rhyming (to me) seems to make things more cutesy, but the rhyme scheme here felt ironic. You were dealing with such a tragic ...

What? God, that sounds like something Meg would love. She's always totally into philosophy and stuff. It totally drives me up the wall. I mean, like, get a life! *laughs* ...

Uh. I dunno. Pretty sociable, I guess. I don't really like that word, sociable. I mean, it's a total chick word. ~Connor Do you prefer sunlight or artificial light?

Oh my goodness! *slams head into the wall* I FORGOT MADELINE L'ENGLE. Good gravy, I'm just retarded today. Okay, so I add Roald Dahl and Madeline L'Engle. Dahl never fails ...

Oh my gosh, if someone says 'the world may never know' one more time I swear I'm going to like, totally have a spaz attack because that annoys the heck ...

I do like it capitalized much better, but I much prefer a simple "for Jesus" than "this is for Jesus." I think the "for Jesus!" idea is a lot stronger ...

Her scowl was what was great... She was all happy-go-lucky, hey I'll kiss this frog and solve all my problems and so she kisses him and he just sits there ...

I've read some really great fanfics for Star Trek (bubbles got me onto that ;)) and Harry Potter. Of course, I've read terrible ones as well, and there are always ...

THAT'S what I forgot... Geeze... that's what I get for posting before eight in the morning... *smacks forehead* Okay, I meant to add: C.S. Lewis . I love all his ...

I completely forgot Tolkien translated Sir Gawain! I loved that when we read it in our Medieval Omnibus last year. The rhyme scheme was cool. My list isn't nearly as ...

I don't have to wonder, because I know. There are moments in life where I just know that God exists, that there's a big plan, that there's something bigger than ...

My first thought at the end of this poem, "Heck yes!" So very nice work overall. A couple of nitpicks and comments, etc.: I read it through about three times, ...