Areida

Howdee! Welcome to the YWS. I'm Areida, also known as Ari. I'm completely addicted to the site. It's a lot of fun, and I hope you enjoy it. If you ...

Wow, Jack, just wow. My first reaction is the same as CL's: "Oh, mercy. Where's a tissue?" Like Kay Juran said, I love your use of short sentences, because most ...

It's cool! I don't think I'd put it on my background because the colours are so bright and would make my poor corneas melt, but it's really neat. Looks like ...

Black bears. When I was a little girl, my father used to read me one story over and over. It was about a little girl who got lost in the ...

Ooh, CL I loved this. :D I liked the lack of punctuation and capitalization because all the words flowed into one another so beautifully, and your line breaks seemed so ...

Omigod you seriously did not just ask me that question. I mean, look at me! Do I even look I could be a mother! My body is flawless, I swear ...

HEKATE IS BACK!!! DUM DUM DUM DUM DEE DUM!!! \:D/

Lily My group was going to blow my cover. This was completely ridiculous. I should have just travelled alone, but I'd feared bandits and robbers and decided a group was ...

I'm a christian so i don't like improper facts that could confuse people or guide them from the truth like it does. But i'm sure it's agood FICTIONAL book to ...

Lily be a rebel. Besides, I didn't figure on a goody-goody travelling along with a bunch of miscreants would be too terribly believable. :P But maybe so... hmm... oh well. ...

Okay, I think what I'm going to do is try and crit a bit at a time, otherwise I'll never finish. I'm so lazy. >.< So here are my comments ...

Woo hoo, go Dusky! \:D/

Yep... I made it... :D Okay, so here goes nothing. Name: Lily Alanna Hamperthane Age: 16 Heritage : Mostly human, with a bit of elf and a touch of dwarf. ...

Yes, I have. No, I don't want to talk about it. Thanks. ~Meg Which do you like better: elephants or camels?

AMEN! I mean, Lucas can plot a heck of a story, but his dialogue makes me want to projectile vomit. "You're so... beautiful." "Only because I'm so in love." "No, ...