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Re: Character Answer Game
I'm learning Latin, and if you tell me it's a dead language, I swear I'll deck you one. Just because no one speaks it anymore doesn't mean it's obsolete. ~Meg ...
Mar 27, 2006 -
Re: Only A Lost Child
Oh, lovely poem. I'm not much good at critiquing poems, but I'm in a poem-y mood this morning so I figured I'd take a crack at it. You, however, completely ...
Mar 25, 2006 -
Re: Yet Another Jealousy Story
I like the way it starts out with a conjuction, because it seems to pull me in right off, but I didn't get a whole lot of feeling, a whole ...
Mar 25, 2006 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
I'm still reading Emma , by Jane Austen, but this morning I started Ella Enchanted because it was the only thing in the kitchen, and now I'm hooked again. :P
Mar 25, 2006 -
Re: hi
Hey, teo, welcome the YWS! I'm Areida, more commonly called Ari. I'm the officially unofficial princess of the site... bow before my greatness... :P Anyway, I'm a mod too, so ...
Mar 22, 2006 -
Re: jack be nimble
You haven't? Well. I like it. :D
Mar 21, 2006 -
Re: Rereading books
Ooh, I did what you did with the sixth HP, Bekster. I read it in about eight hours, and then a week later reread over the course of three or ...
Mar 21, 2006 -
Re: jack be nimble
Ohhh... Smaur, you've blown me away. I don't think I've ever read anything of yours before, but Snoink's ravings have all been true; you're fantastic. You must have edited the ...
Mar 20, 2006 -
Re: Rereading books
I adore re-reading books. Most of the time when I first read a book I'm so eager to find out what happens that I dash through it just to get ...
Mar 20, 2006 -
Re: Acrobat (Freewrite) EDITED and ADDED to...
It seems like you were kind of in a hurry when you wrote this, because there are more minor mistakes than you normally have, and it is very, very short, ...
Mar 18, 2006 -
Re: Missing! All comments welcome! Not full story!
Hey, nice work overall, just a few comments. :D One general comment is that you should put a full space between paragrapsh; indentations makes my eyes hurt while I'm reading ...
Mar 18, 2006 -
Re: I'm New!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey, welcome to the YWS. I'm Areida, but most people call me Ari. Feel free to PM me or any other moderators if you need any help. :D
Mar 18, 2006 -
Re: untitled 2
Okay... I'll look over it and see if I can find a spot that needs to be tweaked in that way. Thanks again for taking the time to read and ...
Mar 18, 2006 -
Re: Lil Dono
Yay, it's Lil Dono with the really awesome avvie! Anyway, I'm Areida, more often called Ari... If you need anything feel free to PM me or just bug Dono, because ...
Mar 16, 2006 -
Re: Losing severely in the Smooth-osity department
Yeah, Misty, don't sweat it. We brunettes are total babes . *tosses hair over shoulder* :P
Mar 15, 2006
