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  • Writing Activities Re: Character Conversations II

    Before the older girl can stop her, the younger girl has butted into the conversation. "Hi," she says, smiling slowly, a sensual curve of her mouth, and letting her eyes ...

    Apr 19, 2006
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Neighbor

    I too was confused at the use of the word "bike." The word "eye" also seemed somewhat ambiguous. Other than those two minor errors, I found this to be an ...

    Apr 18, 2006
  • Official Polls Re: Only who can prevent forest fires?

    It's yoooou and meeee and all of the peeeeople... I voted You. 'Cuz I want to watch the fires. And I think Chuck Norris should put it out. :P

    Apr 18, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: How did I ever sleep alone

    I can't believe I never commented on this... I remember reading it a long time ago and really liking it, so I'm not sure why I didn't post a comment. ...

    Apr 18, 2006
  • Writing Tips Re: Making sure things are clear...

    LOL, whatever makes you happy... Though, actually, now that I read over that very poorly written example, it might be easier on the eyes to make reality bold, one person's ...

    Apr 18, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: New words from books

    I did this two summers ago while I was reading Francine River's A Voice In the Wind and I learned sooo many new words. Useful stuff too, like obsequious, wry, ...

    Apr 17, 2006
  • Writing Tips Re: Making sure things are clear...

    First, lemme say that this sounds very cool. You know I'm a big fan of your Voices stories, so this sounds like it could really turn out to be a ...

    Apr 17, 2006
  • Art & Photography Re: My take on an Oscar Winning film:

    I agree that it was hastily thrown together, but I caught the joke and found it funny despite the sloppiness. I dislike the whole concept of the film, especially since ...

    Apr 13, 2006
  • General Articles Re: In Defense of Harry Potter

    Thanks, Jack, glad you liked it. :D You can do that if you really want to, Addie... *raises eyebrow* But I think Mr. V. and other such people have probably ...

    Apr 13, 2006
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: untitled 2

    More, you say? *evil grin* Actually, there's a third one on the way. Oh dangit... you know, that's the fourth time I've rhymed unintentionally today? Oh my crackers, I just ...

    Apr 13, 2006
  • Media Reviews Re: Animal Farm

    You're ridiculously grandiloquent, you know that, right Addie? *is secretly proud of her smart baby sister* I'm related to that! *beams*

    Apr 13, 2006
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Voices IV: We miss you...

    Yay, Dusky, another Voices! Yay! Another Voices! They keep coming out... I don't know why! I think they're just becoming my signature piece. Maybe one day I'll have enough to ...

    Apr 12, 2006
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members!

    You found the site in Writer's Digest and you're sweet sixteen like me?! You're welcome times a bazillion! \:D/ I'm Areida, but you can call me Ari. PM me if ...

    Apr 12, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: graveyards and roses (me and you)

    Another nice one, Jack. It seems so dark and creepy, but I suppose that's kind of the point... lol... I have one friend who's memorized you know i'd sing for ...

    Apr 12, 2006
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Why YWS Went Out Of Whack On April 11, 2006

    The new logo is cute. I don't know if that's the wrong adjective to convince you that it's cool enough, but that font really is quite adorable. *grins*

    Apr 12, 2006


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