Areida

Hi Isha! Looks like you've had a pretty productive first month on YWS - that's awesome! So here are my thoughts on this piece: 1) Too fast. One second they're ...

I liked your explanation that preceded the drawing. I think it was the "they are not magic" that sold me. Maybe I'm just reaching that uber-sleepy point where I should ...

I'm pretty much a fan of anything that ruthlessly mocks Twilight . It doesn't even have to be well-written, because, let's face it: neither is Twilight . This was much ...

Hi youreit! Hopefully you won't find this too repetitive. I just skimmed a couple of the reviews above, so I'm not sure what all has or has not been said, ...

Hi Jagged! I was looking for something to review, and Snoink recommended this piece to me. I reminded her that I am useless at critiquing poetry, but she promised that ...

I like the colors! It's hard sometimes, I think, to make colors that are all sort of in the same general palette work together this well, but you did a ...

Where are all the comments that this piece deserves!? I'd really like to see where you go with this. Right now you've set up a bunch of questions but haven't ...

It's so true. Kid has the right idea, for sure. I mean, come on, who PLANS on being depressed?

I just sang along to your "Poker Face"/coffee addict parody, so I definitely wanted to come and check this one out too. Good parodies are very difficult to write - ...

This is great! I played "Poker Face" on my iTunes while I was reading through, and most of it fit just perfectly. The only parts I wasn't able to make ...

This is such a good idea! Would you please add me in for the following categories?: Music >> Vocal Geography >> Rural Areas/ Small Towns (20-500 people) >> Texas >> ...

Hi Mr. Dragon! (Hope you don't mind me punctuating your name. I like it a lot. :)) I'm Areida, and I've been around the site for a few years now, ...

Hi hobbit! I stumbled across YWS about five years ago on writing.com, and I've been addicted ever since. It's a really great place. :) Glad that you've found it too!

Kalamazoo is an epic name. Welcome to YWS, squirrely! I'm Areida, and I'm from a small town too, so I sympathize. My small town is in Texas, though, so we ...

This is so cool, Adam! I agree that there are a couple of perspective angle and that the people could be a bit more natural looking, but I'm pretty impressed, ...